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Tuesday, September 11, 2012

My Holiday Ryming Poem




The holidays were all right, but then there started to be a fight.
We started to play in the house and a song came called ‘Dynamite’.

We went to get cash for my mum and dad, then suddenly a man came and that was bad.
We went to the the swimming pool down in Mabury, I went to get pies and then I saw a cat that was fury.

I went to go eat with my family, Then we had to walk back home sadly.

2 comments:

Aurora said...

Wow monique great poem those pie must have been yum and that song is a song I have not herd that song before but great job too.

BY see you later.

Sonya said...

Well done Monique I really like your poem about your holiday. Maybe next time when you write a poem maybe you could check your writing to see if it makes sense and then you could post in onto your blog:) Keep up the great work:)

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